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Title: Not bad for a kindergartner...IMO


Stringaling - June 1, 2007 07:32 PM (GMT)
This is a copy of the email my daughter sent her Grandma yesterday:

QUOTE
anneliese here i like to read  befor i  go to bed  it helps me to go to sleep
and i learn and i am 6 so it is posubl do you read befor you go to sleep
sleep is inportent and if you  dote you will get sleepei
but if we sleep we will not get sleepei anneliese is 6 mama is 29 baby is 1 elijah is 4
dada is 35 well that is how old my family is
how are you doing are you haveing fun
i am  haveing fun becus i am 6



She did ask my help on 2 words...

clayman - June 1, 2007 07:44 PM (GMT)
Awesome job! She's writing better than my oldest. We have had to use the "creative process" with her for every stinkin' thing she writes - including letters.
  • OK - sit down and brainstorm about what you want to say.
  • Put them in order.
  • Elaborate on those ideas.
  • Now make them into sentences.
  • Write those sentences in the form of a letter/report/etc.
  • Write it again - neater this time!

Golfingmom - June 1, 2007 08:00 PM (GMT)
were the 2 words:

Posubl and becus?



























:gotcha:

Good for her.

Sarah - June 1, 2007 08:06 PM (GMT)
:thumbsup:

Honey - June 1, 2007 08:55 PM (GMT)
Hmm, not bad! :thumbsup:

andiesmama - June 1, 2007 11:20 PM (GMT)
berry cute, what a great job!!

seige - June 2, 2007 02:25 AM (GMT)
Dear Grandma,

This is Anneliese. I like to read before I go to bed. It helps me to go to sleep
and I also learn how to read better. Since I am 6 it is possible to learn more easily. Do you read before you go to sleep?

Sleep is important and if you don’t you will get sleepy the next day, but if we sleep we will not get sleepy.

Anneliese is 6, Mama is 29, Baby is 1, Elijah is 4 and Dada is 35. That is how old my family is.

How are you doing? Are you having fun? I am having fun because I am 6.


Sincerely,

Anneliese




I went through and tracked changes on word and pasted it back on here but it did not show up... just thought I'd razz you- teachers joke all the time about always correcting things instead of enjoying how great they are as they are written. If someone sends me an email and there are a lot of misspelled words I just cringe...




Your daughter is doing great and I can't wait to have her in my class!

Stringaling - June 2, 2007 05:39 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (seige @ Jun 1 2007, 08:25 PM)
Dear Grandma,

This is Anneliese. I like to read before I go to bed. It helps me to go to sleep
and I also learn how to read better. Since I am 6 it is possible to learn more easily. Do you read before you go to sleep?

Sleep is important and if you don’t you will get sleepy the next day, but if we sleep we will not get sleepy.

Anneliese is 6, Mama is 29, Baby is 1, Elijah is 4 and Dada is 35. That is how old my family is.

How are you doing? Are you having fun? I am having fun because I am 6.


Sincerely,

Anneliese




I went through and tracked changes on word and pasted it back on here but it did not show up... just thought I'd razz you- teachers joke all the time about always correcting things instead of enjoying how great they are as they are written. If someone sends me an email and there are a lot of misspelled words I just cringe...




Your daughter is doing great and I can't wait to have her in my class!

I know what you mean. Drives me insane when I see adults making simple errors like that over and over and over...

I am going to start discussing sentence structure with her next week. Of course just the basic capitalization and periods for now. Spelling is coming naturally the more she is reading and the more we work on Phonics..

squatpuke - June 2, 2007 06:55 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Stringaling @ Jun 1 2007, 12:32 PM)
This is a copy of the email my daughter sent her Grandma yesterday:

QUOTE
anneliese here i like to read  befor i  go to bed  it helps me to go to sleep
and i learn and i am 6 so it is posubl do you read befor you go to sleep
sleep is inportent and if you  dote you will get sleepei
but if we sleep we will not get sleepei anneliese is 6 mama is 29 baby is 1 elijah is 4
dada is 35 well that is how old my family is
how are you doing are you haveing fun
i am  haveing fun becus i am 6



She did ask my help on 2 words...

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Her and a2j should correspond.....




wait....it's actually better than Louise's writing....nevermind, you might confuse her.

Sarah - June 2, 2007 07:50 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (squatpuke @ Jun 2 2007, 12:55 PM)
QUOTE (Stringaling @ Jun 1 2007, 12:32 PM)
This is a copy of the email my daughter sent her Grandma yesterday:

QUOTE
anneliese here i like to read  befor i  go to bed  it helps me to go to sleep
and i learn and i am 6 so it is posubl do you read befor you go to sleep
sleep is inportent and if you  dote you will get sleepei
but if we sleep we will not get sleepei anneliese is 6 mama is 29 baby is 1 elijah is 4
dada is 35 well that is how old my family is
how are you doing are you haveing fun
i am  haveing fun becus i am 6



She did ask my help on 2 words...

.
.
Her and a2j should correspond.....




wait....it's actually better than Louise's writing....nevermind, you might confuse her.

Whatever! You're just jealous that you can't write A2J style! :cowboy:




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